It hurt to breathe in.
The cuts in her lungs, little origami slices.
Stung and hung like bloody stars against the grey sky.
To weep, was to be weak.
The voice echoed from a childhood memory.
Tangled in the box of her mind like Christmas decorations.
The machine whirled into robotic life.
Its own circadian rhythm forcing all to breathe in and out in unison.
Rings banished, symbols of love and connection threatened.
No god here.
Empty souls shuffled into pale suits.
And children forbidden to smile.
The anaesthetic now killing everything inside.
Feelings of escape being buried alive.
She came across a memory, shiny like the Christmas star.
Dusty too after much forgetting.
Falling from the oak tree, while the summer sun glistened it’s caramel.
A thump, and pain. That reaching for breath that struggled to come.
The world dancing, blurred into psychotropic haze.
Until she burst through the surface of pain, and gulped fresh air.
The gold was in the overcoming, and the gentle rub on her back.
Spreading like ivy.
From someone who had already gone.
Swallowing fresh razors she breathed in once more.
Hugging that memory.
Strength coursing through her bloodstream to her lion heart.
Meeting them again, or making them proud.
The fork before her was beautiful and beckoning.

Beautiful writing!
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Thank you, appreciate that. Glad you liked it.
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I love this poem, wonderful metaphors conjure so much feeling
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Thank you for saying, the feelings were pretty raw; but blanketed in the metaphor which i’m glad worked. Appreciate you saying, glad you enjoyed it.
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Tears 😭 I felt every word Mark . Raw 😭 Well done ✅
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A genuine unpolished poem. I love the imagery. Well written.
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Yep, defintely tangled by the weeds. Thank you, apprecuate you saying and glad you enjoyed it,
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