UNRAVEL
Pull here she said.
A little chord, so deep.
So red.
And unravelled the great divide.
Pulling down the curtains, the illusions.
What was before, now gone. Faded into time.
She smiled, with a small frustration remaining in her eyes.
Of why it took so long.
All around the walls of the world fell.
No sound but the wind of change blowing through these bones.
Hollowed and weak from the weight of such a world upon them for so long.
Bare she had found us, no clothes, shawl or patience left.
Yet she gave us her hand, and asked us to pull the chord.
That little red twine of hope that dangled from another universe.
She was, after all, another version of ourselves.
Similar yet so different.
Her smiles were genuine.
Generic by such judgement that we cast into the voids of space.
And now she said, make haste.
And burn what lies upon the floor of the galaxy.
Tomorrow beckons, the dust must remain.
So we tugged at the chord, and held our breath.
Through veils, hoods, and blindfolds.
Refusing, at times, to know any different.
And then the souls gave way, falling free to something beautiful.
A painted landscape tied up in selflessness.
Her gift to us, wet with the dew of time.
Wrapped up and contained on our fingertips.
All we needed to do, was unravel and believe.
For to see is to believe.
And our eyes will not betray us again.
I loved your poetry sir!! It was intense yet soothing. Great work sir !!πβ€β
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Thank you, glad you like the work and the mixing paradoxes π I appreciate you appreciating, happy there is an audience.
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I am your trusted reader sirππ. Always happy to read your post πβ€β
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That tickles my heart, thank you.
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enchanting! the music pulls me into the poem
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The music is lovely, it’s from the movie Phantom thread if you’ve seen…..seemed fitting π
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I do remember that movie! and how dark it was, but then one of Day-Lewis’s best roles. I did not recall the music though, but yes now that you mention it, very “fitting”.
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Agreed, DDL has some such wonderful roles but this was truly wonderful. Shame he retired, but guess we all must at some point.
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Beautiful bittersweet tone here, Mark!
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Thank you Tom, glad you liked it.
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